I think that the most valuable object I own it`s my book, I mean, my books. As a matter of fact I don`t like to have some kind of feelings towards material things, one of the reasons is that I don`t really have a fixed place of residence. Therefore, to have material objects and not being atrached to them is more convenient for me.
Regarding my books, I chose them as my most valuable objects because they give me knowledge, they sohw me other realities and almost all that I have, they have been gifts from different people, especially from my girl; she loves me and made me love the books too.
On the other hand, the books aren`t material objects that could have an electronic or mechanical failure and stop working. They don`t have a considerable economic value either, at least not my books. And they don`t become absolete like fashion clothe, cell phones or cars.
I don`t like that lot of people take care of their possessions as if they were human beings, this is not good because when we die, we don`t take anything with us. The reason of giving a significant value to material objects has taken popularity due to consumerism and the tendency to accumulate possessions in the society in which we live.
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Hi Humberto!
ResponderEliminarI like your work. You manage well the use of language. I think your text is related with your profile, they complement each other
Hi Humberto.
ResponderEliminarI like what you wrote, I agree with you about what you said of material things, it’s nice to reed that the objects most valuable for you are books, maybe the only thing you forget was to specify what kind of books are in your collection.
Hi Humberto, I liked your ideas, actually I share them. The way how you organize the information is excellent. Good job.
ResponderEliminarHI Humberto!
ResponderEliminarI like your text, you describe very well your emotions and thoughts and you made in a concrete mode.. I liked it...
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Hey Humberto
ResponderEliminarWow, books!! You are absolutely right to cherish books, you may want to say what kind of books do you like (i'm guessing you dont like "Libro Vaquero")
Great work dude
Hi Humberto:
ResponderEliminarI like the way you expressed your ideas, they are very clear and very well organized. It is a good text.
Hi Humberto: Good work, good organization, I like the way you think about material objects, and well in general I like it, so again good work.
ResponderEliminarHello Humberto!!!
ResponderEliminarYou presented the idea of a treasured object in a little ordinary way, because you area against of value the material things. I thing that you are right but you forgot the sentimental meaning that we can associate to those things unconsciously. I think that your composition is good because you have a good structure.
Hello Humberto:
ResponderEliminarI like your text! I think you organised your ideas in a very good way! In addition, in the last lines you describe what you think about material things and why you don't like giving them a sentimental value!
Hi Humberto,
ResponderEliminarI think your ideas are very interesting, and I agree with you in some aspects. I think the composition is well done, but I would check the structure and develop more the ideas in order to emphasize your points of view and make it more understandable.
Good work, I agree with you in some ideas, it seems that you were able to organize yours, but maybe you can also develop more to make a strong argumentation of all your ideas...
ResponderEliminarHi Humberto.
ResponderEliminarYour composition is very clear. You gave your reason for not treasuring many objects, and you also tell the reason to treasure your books. I agree with your ideas, but you can also give more details about your books (how many or which books).
I liked your work, you gave a strong point of view, but you could make it more clear or specific.
ResponderEliminarHi Humberto,I really enjoyed your composition because I share your way of thinking about the things that really matter in life. Altough there are some ideas unconnected, I think that the message you try to transmit is very clear; I would only suggest to be more emphatic on the conclusion, in order to make your work even better. Nice work.
ResponderEliminarHi humberto:
ResponderEliminarI liked your arguments and the context is very good maybe I would just change the first paragraph and make it more interesting to atract the reader´s atention.
Sincerely
Robert
Hi.
ResponderEliminarI think that you exposed your point of view well, but I felt that you mixed ideas in your essay, going from your books to explain why you don't like material things.
I believe that you should have been more concise each paragraph, and finish your ideas in each one.
That's my point of view.
Gabriel García
Great composition, I think that you have an hability for puting down on paper what you really want to say.
ResponderEliminarI just think that you need an introductory paragraph and to make your text a little longer.
Hi Humberto
ResponderEliminarYour composition has very good organization, I like the way you think about material objects and how you appreciate books
Good job.
Bere
Hi Humberto!
ResponderEliminarI like your composition because it´s well organized and I agree with the ideas you expose on the text. Also, I like how you wrote the content clear and objectively. Good job!
Hello
ResponderEliminarIt's a good job but i recommend you to make more interesting the opening paragraph, i know that is your opinion about the books, but you can describe the fact that you like it,because we have many books but maybe there are one specially.
Hi Humberto
ResponderEliminarYour idea is clear, so you made a text easy to follow. Check the mechanics. Perhaps you could add more details about the kind of books that you like and what have you learned from them, how they made your life more interesting.